DarkenedAngels poetry

I don't have any poems with me now but in the near future I plan to post some of my own works here. I would love everyones honest opinions of them so don't hold back I can handle it.

Alright here is the first one...

We act on impulse
We rely on guilt
We know our place
But we don't care

We live our lives
By our own rules
We will not stop
Till we rule the roost

So step back world
We're stepping out
Back off losers
We're out of our cell

So let us scream
Leave us be
We're here to stay
We won't go away

So sit back
Yo listen up
This is us
We won't shut up!

that 's awesome! You do this all the time?

Very nice........as usual. I really think you should put them all together into a book.....

that's a good idea.

Everyone keeps telling me that but I would have to get help with putting it all together...

I would be more than happy to help you...

Why does everybody want me to make a book?? I mean I don't even think they are good.

Then you are a PSYCO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I am not I just don't like most of my poems.

DarkenedAngel your poetry rox!!! Keep writing

If you think hers are good, try a little of mine.
Here's a link to the site where I post most of my work.
My work

I need to add a few more that I've written, but aside from that, this is a majority of it.